On the Athletics day we do sport. We were watching the year 1 & 2 racing in the obstacle course. One of them said it was hard to do it and it was freezing cold.
When the horn blew you had to swap the games. It was really fantastic, fun, and amazing.
Everyone enjoyed doing athletics.
hi Kaichi,
ReplyDeleteI really like your story I also like the photos you included in your writing!!!
Hello kaichi,I like your recount but what was in the obstacle course?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kaichi, I liked your blog post about Athletics Day. I also liked how you asked someone about how they felt and then wrote it down. My feed forward to you is to add more detail and write where Athletics Day was.
ReplyDeleteHi Kaichi, I think you must have worked really hard to interview those people. I also think you worked really well because it was freezing cold. Everyone must have enjoy athletics. Those were awesome photo’s that you included in your writing. Great effort!
ReplyDeleteHi Kaichi ,I really liked how have done an amazing job adding the photos. I liked how you said what the weather is and who did the athletics also I liked how you have said what you felt like.
ReplyDeleteHi Kaichi
ReplyDeleteThe athletics day was amazing and the obstacle course was amazing. I liked your writing because it reminded me about sports day
thank you everyone of you i really like all of your comments.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you used punctuation can you tell us what time it was?
ReplyDeleteHi Kaichi
ReplyDeleteThe athletics day was amazing and the obstacle course was amazing. I liked your writing because it reminded me about sports day
To Kaichi
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said someone was freezing cold. My feedback is if you say who was freezing cold it adds more detail. My hub is hub 9 too.
Hi Katich I liked when you said everyone enjoyed the Athletics day.what was your favourite game.
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