Thursday, 22 October 2015

The School Fair by Kyle F

In the morning my dad was helping at the school fair before me and my mum arrived at school. I bought a ninjago stuffed toy from the toy making stall, next to hub 9. Then I bought a 3D printing ghost made by the seniors. After that I played tennis with Aarav on the court. I bought some sherbet with a lollypop, which was purple and tasted like grape and the sherbet was strawberry. We went on the the big playground and me, Aarav and Flynn played with me. After that we played with my Airjitzu, Then I had to sell cards outside the hub, but I got bored, so my Mum looked after it. Then it was time to go home because it was late. I had fun at the fair! That was the best day ever!
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  1. Unknown22 October 2015 at 15:11

    Hi Kyle, wasn't the school fair fun! I bought a marvellous tooth brush holder from the seniors who have been using the 3D printer. I love it. I also ate some very tasty food. I'm already looking forward to the next one.

    Mrs Burt
    Manaiakalani

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  2. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 17:29

    Keep up the good writing!

    Kyle's Mum

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  3. Unknown2 November 2015 at 18:36

    Hi Kyle, I went to your stall and saw your dad helping. I thought that the ninja toys were amazing! I loved what you wrote and it was amazing!

    Zara C

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  4. Unknown3 November 2015 at 07:54

    The ninja toy were amazing.i really loved them. From Brodie

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  5. Kaelan9 November 2015 at 12:41

    Hi Kyle, I liked your blog post you had lots of information.

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  6. kaichi9 November 2015 at 12:42

    Hi kyle, I like the school staff toys that you made a the school fair. Your magic show was amazing as well.
    When I saw your magic show I was in prist. My favorite trick was when you pulled the thumb off Dinesan and put it back on again.

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  7. Krishna9 November 2015 at 12:45

    Kia ora Kyle, I really liked your story. I liked how you told me all the things you did at the fair. What was your dad doing in the fair?

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    1. Kyle16 November 2015 at 19:35

      Hi Krishna, my dad was helping in the fair.

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  8. Dinesan23 November 2015 at 11:34

    Nice writing, Kyle! I would like to buy a ninjago stuffed toy!

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  9. Dylan23 November 2015 at 11:36

    kai ora kyle I like your story my favorite part was when you bought a 3D printing ghost haere ra.

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  10. Britta23 November 2015 at 11:38

    Good writing Kyle. I like how you have used lots of juicy words. I think you could add more detail by describing the colours of the ghost.

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  11. kaichi23 November 2015 at 11:41

    Hi kyle, I like the school staff toys that you made a the school fair. Your magic show was amazing as well.
    When I saw your magic show I was in prist. My favorite trick was when you pulled the thumb off Dinesan and put it back on again.

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  12. Madi23 November 2015 at 11:53

    Good work Kyle. I went too. I played tennis to. How much was the 3D ghost?

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  13. Aaron23 November 2015 at 11:56

    I like your writing Kyle. You could add what you felt and what you liked about the ghost.

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  14. Miss Campbell23 November 2015 at 12:10

    I love your ending Kyle! I was at the fair too. I had a fun time just like you. How much did you pay for the 3D printer ghost?

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  15. Emma ri23 November 2015 at 12:22

    Ahi Ahi marie Kyle i really like your story that you wrote. It reminds me of my story about The School Fair.

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  16. Jim23 November 2015 at 12:25

    Hi Kyle
    How much money was the 3D printed ghost? Maybe you should go to the fair next year, then you could bring your friends with you until you go home.

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  17. Dominic23 November 2015 at 12:27

    Hi Kyle
    I like your story about the fair. Did you enjoy the fair? I went to the fair too.

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  18. Mio23 November 2015 at 12:34

    Hi Kyle
    How much money did your mum spend? Maybe your whole family could have gone?!

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