by Mia.M, Ashikka, Lily and Rachel
In the morning year 0-2 did Athletics at Stonefields School. We do Athletics day because it helps us to keep us fit. Everyone has to do Athletics so no one has to do anything to enter it. We get split up into groups otherwise some people might miss out on doing the activities. The weather was cold and cloudy.
In high jump you need to have special equipment like poles and crash mats. High jump is also a very fun activity.
Divesh felt scared because he thought he might not land on the crash mat. Divesh also felt determined.
Zoe H from hub 9’s top tip for high jump was to do the same movement. Amy from hub 5/6 said she really liked the high jump.
Sprints is like running but you start from a different position. When you are sprinting you go into lanes.
If you go into a different lane you are disqualified. When you are sprinting you have to pump your hands as hard as you can. Tom from hub 5/6 came first in sprints.
Long jump is about jumping the furthest you can go. On long jump after you have jumped they will count you back foot and see how long you have gone. Manave came first in long jump and he is in hub 5/6. Blake’s top tip was to swing your arms before you jump. Bella from hub 9 said to push your feet of the ground. Zoe from hub 9 said she kind of liked the long jump. Macey from hub 5/6 loved the long jump because there was a sand pit that you got to jump in. Antonio felt good after long jump.
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Kia ora Mia M, Ashikka, Lily, and Rachel. I liked how you said the years that were doing athletics day . I also liked how you said you split into groups ,and start with that teacher. I loved how you said how to do high jump. Also what you need to do high jump and, the top tips to do high jump. You could also put a picture of the runners starting position.
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ReplyDeleteHi Mia M, Maya here. I read your story on athletics day I loved your story and it was so long. How long did it take you to write it? I love your story but one thing you could improve on is adding a few more full stops so the reader can have a break at some point. Otherwise it was a great story for people who do not know about athletics day they can read your story and find out what athletics day at Stonefields school. Well done. from Maya
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ReplyDeleteHello ashika, lily ,Mia and Rachel I think that you have done so well so far I liked how you talked to the year 0-2 to find out there feelings were.Next time I think you should Do it individually
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