Wednesday, 13 May 2015

My Fiji Holiday by Zoe H


  1. Wonderful writing Zoe. You added lots of detail and this helped us remember all the things we did in Fiji. Super Learning! (Mum, Dad and Jayden).

  2. Hi Zoe
    I love your writing. You have used lots of excellent adjectives. It makes me want to jump on a plane to Fiji and go swimming in the hot weather. I bet Izzy was happy to see you also. :) Auntie Vicki

  3. Hi Zoe,It's Brooke here.You did great at writing and drawing about your holiday. I like the way you used lots of adjective words and told us all about it.