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Monday, 30 November 2015
Thursday, 26 November 2015
WALHT share our free writing on our hub blog. Title: Fairy Brand
The fairy Brand
By Ashlee
Once upon a time there was a fairy named Ms Brand. She only had two wings, so everyone called her her Cray Cray Fairy Brand, and she did not like it, so she named herself Cool Moo Hoo Lady. She wore a tutu and she had to fly a marathon in her tutu. She just went one meter so that her tutu did not get sweat on it. Then she said I'm done and since she only did one meter she got disqualified. She had to do 20000 burps and then she flew back to her house.
She finds Miss N at her house and she screamed so her wings fall off and she had to pick them up and put them on, but instead, she put them on Miss N. Miss, N did not know how to fly so she crashed into the roof, and Ms Brand laughed and she fell onto the ground and the wings flew them self into the bin. And when they came out they were very smelly and, then they went back onto Ms Brand and then Ms Brand went into the shower.
Then the shower smelt and when she came out she was as pretty as a rose so everyone called her Buttercup Lovely. She did not think that she was pretty so she kept on having more showers but then Miss N went in and said, "You are as pretty as a rose". So Buttercup Lovely said, ''I have had enough of showers I am going to go for a walk with Miss N''.
As they were walking a frog jumped onto the pretty dress that Buttercup Lovely was wearing so she screamed to Miss N, ''There is a frog on my favourite dress! We have to go straight home even though I just had 10000 showers! I have to shower!"
That is the funny end
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My story of boss Dylan,Annoying Mrs Missi and little servant Mia M. By Kush
WALHT:Share our free writing on our hub blog.
We were to take our free writing in our books, and publish it on our device. We then needed to mark it against the blog rubric to see if would make a good blog post. We were then able to publish to the blog.
My story of boss Dylan,Annoying Mrs Missi and little servant Mia M. By Kush
Once upon a time there lived two people called boss Dylan and annoying Mrs Missi . Dylan was rich and he would always make Bow and arrows and fast cars also he would make war stuff. Annoying Mrs Missi would always put makeup and buy fancy stuff. Dylan didn’t like annoying Mrs Missi because she would waste money in girly stuff and also she would never stop taking she was a chatterbox! But one day annoying Mrs Missi was very annoying she wasted all of her money that was in her bank and brought heaps of useless stuff for her that Dylan decided to kick annoying Mrs Missi out of the house. Dylan was planning in his bedroom how to kick annoying Mrs Missi out of the house and go to another country without annoying Mrs Missi knowing what he is doing and where he was going. Later Dylan said “MIA GIVE ME AN COFFEE”! Said Dylan “yes your majesty” Little Mia gave Dylan his coffe and Dylan snathced the coffee off Mia without even saying any manners.So the very next morning he took annoying Mrs Missi too a very quit place and then he started his plan and said annoing Mrs Missi look over there theres a big million dollar note but it was fake and then she ran to it Dylan started running as fast as he could back to the house and started paking is bag when he was done he quicly got his bag and went outside he got on his Buggati Veron and drove as fast has he could to the airport he gave his pass port and got it back he did the body check up and he had nothing bad in his clothes he got on the plane and he was going to south Africa it took very long when he got there it was day time he got to his house and Dylan had a buggati veron a Lamborghini andervater and a Hummer also he had a rich house and a swimming pool Dylan was very happy and annoying Mrs Missi just lived her life.
The End!!!
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Metacognition - thinking about your thinking (Y2/3)
Today in maths we went into the learning pit. We were doing our division basic facts at speed to see what our brain did under pressure. We stood at the front of the class in groups of three and Ms Brand gave us timed questions to answer. We were racing each other to answer.
Afterwards, we reflected by ourselves about what our brain was actually doing under all that pressure, and then made meaning as a group. We decided that most of us actually used some strategy to work out our basic facts. Which meant that they weren't actually basic facts that we knew and we needed to practice more.
We used reversibility to solve some tricky 9 times tables. Which meant we made it a 3 step process rather than a 1 step process. For 4 times tables we halved, then halved again. This is good to know that our brain doesn't just go blank but finds a way around to solve a problem.
Now that we understand what our brain does under pressure in maths, we are hoping to improve how we answer division basic facts questions.
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Tuesday, 24 November 2015
The New Parks by Kate
One day there was a girl walking by a park, but she never knew it was a park. That day she looked and saw it was a park. So she went to play there. Her name was Chloe and she had a dog called Coco, and a cat called Mika. Mika and Coco loved to eat ice cream but if they ate too much, they would get sick.They also liked to go to the park and they could talk. Mika was scared of dogs but she wasn’t scared of Coco. Coco didn’t try to chase her all the time. Chloe loved parks too. Her pets already knew the park was there, that’s why they always said: “stop”, but Chloe never stopped to explore it. Now she knew she would always go to play at the park with her pets. The pets loved to go on the spinning wheel, but when they got off the spinning wheel they always felt dizzy and sick. Then one day there was a whole new park next to it and everyone was there instead of at the park she had discovered yesterday. The builders were still building the park. Then Chloe recognised all the builders. They were called the Evil Club. She didn't know there real names. She tried to tell everyone that they were evil, but they didn’t believe her. Every Summer, Autumn, Spring and Winter no one but Chloe was playing at the old park anymore. Everyone laughed at her. The park got older and older, and more lonely and lonely. Chloe’s pets still liked to go on the spinning wheel but for some reason they didn't feel sick after, only dizzy. After they played at the old park they got an ice cream each, and then the pets felt sick. They told the government, but the government officials replied that they couldn’t help, they could only clean it up. The government cleaned up the park and everyone thought it was new again. Everyone started to play there again. Every week Chloe built a new part of the park. The evil club wanted their revenge and they wanted everyone to play at their park again. So the evil club built more and more and everyone found it really hard to choose to which park to go, so they didn’t go to the parks at all! They kept building until it was going on the road. Finally they stopped and saw that no one was coming to the parks anymore. They decided to go home. They put spy cameras in their parks and slowly there got to be an even amount of people in the parks. Then a girl came and looked at both parks and said: “hmmm….. which one is better than the other” and she continued: “they're both fantastic!”. She chose both of them to go on TV News Live and they became friends. It was her dream to be on tv. All of her family were watching her on tv and she became a star. Then Chloe decided to be a singer and a news star. She loved to be a star and they were so famous that everyone went to their playgrounds. By kate
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The Magic book by Maya E
The Magic book
Once upon a time there lived a little fairy named Holly. One day Holly found a magic book in the hollow of a magic tree. She cast a spell that let the pimple witch back in to fairy land.The pimple witch started to play tricks on Holly, like stealing her hairbrush in the morning when she needed it. But those little tricks led to serious problems and those serious problems led the pimple witch to trying to steal the magic book. Holly would not let the pimple witch steal the magic book, so she slept with the book in the protecters' tree which had a force field that protected the book and Holly. When Holly woke up Holly thought that maybe she could put a magic spell on the witch.The spell that she used was a hypnotising spell, it hypnotised the witch. As Holly took the witch's hat off, Holly defeated the pimple witch. But more trouble was coming. If she defeated the pimple witch more pimple witches would come and 100 more pimple witches did come.Holly was frightened and did not know what to do, so she cast a spell that said: ''4 kill time'' she cast the spell and it defeated 4 pimple witches at once. I shall do this to all the pimple witches and she did. It worked. What Holly did not know, is that if you defeat all pimple witches they turn into Evil Brand and they did. She took over the Magic book and made trees walk and pink polka dots appear in the sky. Will this land be like this forever or not.The end ... or is it?
Once upon a time there lived a little fairy named Holly. One day Holly found a magic book in the hollow of a magic tree. She cast a spell that let the pimple witch back in to fairy land.The pimple witch started to play tricks on Holly, like stealing her hairbrush in the morning when she needed it. But those little tricks led to serious problems and those serious problems led the pimple witch to trying to steal the magic book. Holly would not let the pimple witch steal the magic book, so she slept with the book in the protecters' tree which had a force field that protected the book and Holly. When Holly woke up Holly thought that maybe she could put a magic spell on the witch.The spell that she used was a hypnotising spell, it hypnotised the witch. As Holly took the witch's hat off, Holly defeated the pimple witch. But more trouble was coming. If she defeated the pimple witch more pimple witches would come and 100 more pimple witches did come.Holly was frightened and did not know what to do, so she cast a spell that said: ''4 kill time'' she cast the spell and it defeated 4 pimple witches at once. I shall do this to all the pimple witches and she did. It worked. What Holly did not know, is that if you defeat all pimple witches they turn into Evil Brand and they did. She took over the Magic book and made trees walk and pink polka dots appear in the sky. Will this land be like this forever or not.The end ... or is it?
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The Stonefields fairy by Devynee
Once upon a time there lived three fairies named Milly, Karina and Kelly. The oldest was Milly, she was 16, the second oldest was Karina, she was 15. Kelly was 14 and one of the youngest fairies in the universe. Kelly didn’t like being a young and small fairy, because everyone was teasing her. That’s why she decided to wait at home for a little bit so she would have more time to try and get taller, but she could never think of anything to do to get taller. Suddenly she thought of an idea. Her sisters could give her a makeover. When her sisters got back she asked them if they could give her a makeover like a tall makeover with tall high heels and like a big swirl on top of her head, because she had long hair. After the makeover she went out walking in the city with her sisters. She felt tall but when she came back home she looked at herself in the mirror and thought ... I shouldn’t have asked for that makeover, because she realized that she didn’t care what other people thought so she took her high heels off and undid her hair and went downstairs to tell her sisters that she didn’t really care about what other people thought and they all lived ever after.
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