WALHT share our free writing on our hub blog. Title: Fairy Brand

The fairy Brand 

By Ashlee

Once upon a time there was a fairy named Ms Brand. She only had two wings, so everyone called her her Cray Cray Fairy Brand, and she did not like it, so she named herself Cool Moo Hoo Lady. She wore a tutu and she had to fly a marathon in her tutu. She just went one meter so that her tutu did not get sweat on it. Then she said I'm done and since she only did one meter she got disqualified. She had to do 20000 burps and then she flew back to her house. 

She finds Miss N at her house and she screamed so  her wings fall off and she had to pick them up and put them on, but instead, she put them on Miss N. Miss, N did not know how to fly so she crashed into the roof, and Ms Brand laughed and she fell onto the ground and the wings flew them self into the bin. And when they came out they were very smelly and, then they went back onto Ms Brand and then Ms Brand went into the  shower. 

Then the  shower smelt and when she came out she was as pretty as a rose so everyone called her Buttercup Lovely. She did not think that she was pretty so she kept on having more showers but then Miss N went in and said, "You are as pretty as a rose". So Buttercup Lovely said, ''I have had enough of showers I am going to go for a walk with Miss N''. 

As they were walking a frog jumped onto the pretty dress that Buttercup Lovely was wearing so she screamed to Miss N, ''There is a frog on my favourite dress! We have to go straight home even though I just had 10000 showers! I have to  shower!"

That is the funny end

My story of boss Dylan,Annoying Mrs Missi and little servant Mia M. By Kush

WALHT:Share our free writing on our hub blog.

We were to take our free writing in our books, and publish it on our device. We then needed to mark it against the blog rubric  to see if would make a good blog post.  We were then able to publish to the blog.

My story of boss Dylan,Annoying Mrs Missi and little servant Mia M.  By Kush

Once upon a time there lived two people called boss Dylan and annoying Mrs Missi . Dylan was rich and he would always make Bow and arrows and fast cars also he would make war stuff. Annoying Mrs Missi would always put makeup and buy fancy stuff.  Dylan didn’t like annoying Mrs Missi because she would waste money in girly stuff and also she would never stop taking she was a chatterbox! But one day annoying Mrs Missi was very annoying she wasted all of her money that was in her bank and brought heaps of useless stuff for her that Dylan decided to kick annoying Mrs Missi out of the house. Dylan was planning in his bedroom how to kick annoying Mrs Missi out of the house and go to another country without annoying Mrs Missi knowing what he is doing and where he was going. Later Dylan said    “MIA GIVE ME AN COFFEE”! Said Dylan “yes your majesty” Little Mia gave Dylan his coffe and Dylan snathced the coffee off Mia without even saying any manners.So the very next morning he took annoying Mrs Missi too a very quit place and then he started his plan and said annoing Mrs Missi look over there theres a big million dollar note but it was fake and then she ran to it Dylan started running as fast as he could back to the house and started paking is bag when he was done he quicly got his bag and went outside he got on his Buggati Veron and drove as fast has he could to the airport he gave his pass port and got it back he did the body check up and he had nothing bad in his clothes he got on the plane and he was going to south Africa it took very long when he got there it was day time he got to his house and Dylan had a buggati veron a Lamborghini andervater and a Hummer also he had a rich house and a swimming pool Dylan was very happy and annoying Mrs Missi just lived her life.  

The End!!!

The Stonefields fairy by Devynee

The stonefields fairy by Devynee

Once upon a time there lived three fairies named Milly, Karina and Kelly. The oldest was Milly, she was 16, the second oldest was Karina, she was 15. Kelly was 14 and one of the youngest fairies in the universe. Kelly didn’t like being a young and small fairy, because everyone was teasing her. That’s why she decided to wait at home for a little bit so she would have more time to try and get taller, but she could never think of anything to do to get taller. Suddenly she thought of an idea. Her sisters could give her a makeover. When her sisters got back she asked them if they could give her a makeover like a tall makeover with tall high heels and like a big swirl on top of her head, because she had long hair. After the makeover she went out walking in the city with her sisters. She felt tall but when she came back home she looked at herself in the mirror and thought ... I shouldn’t have asked for that makeover, because she realized that she didn’t care what other people thought so she took her high heels off and undid her hair and went downstairs to tell her sisters that she didn’t really care about what other people thought and they all lived ever after.

WALHT:Share our free writing on our hub blog By Rachel

WALHT:Share our free writing on our hub blog 

We were getting our free writing book and chose one story. Then we published the story on our devices. We marked it against the blog rubric and then we posted it to the blog. I learnt to think more about how to edit and do my layout.

The haunted house

                                                                 One day a girl named Sarah and her family were going to camp. Everyone got to have their own big bag that they could put their camping gear in. Sarah was the smallest, so she got the smallest bag. She put in her torch and some toys. Sarah had a brother named Sam, her mum and dad. There would be two tents. Sam and dad would sleep in one and mum and Sarah were going in the other tent. They all got a sleeping bag. Sarah got a purple sleeping bag because purple was her favourite colour. Then they went in their car. Sarah was excited but scared at the same time. She was scared because when she would be sleeping there would be scary noises. But she was excited too because she loved campfires. When they finally arrived, Sarah helped mum to set up the tent. By the time it was night time she heard a laugh that sounded like a witch. She wanted to tell mum but mum was asleep. So she decided to go explore where the sound was coming from.When she decided to go it was dark and scary, but luckily she had a torch, because sheI knew, that she would go explore. The closer she got, the more clear and loud  she could hear the witchy soundI She saw a ginormous black house. She rubbed her eyes but it was still there. She went into the black house … she saw a witch and the witch saw her! She ran as fast as she could go and finally she went back to her tent and felt safe .

By Rachel

The Neverland Story by Emma Re

WALHT share our free writing on our hub blog.

We were to take our free writing in our books, and publish it on our device. We then needed to mark it against the blog rubric  to see if would make a good blog post.  We were then able to publish to the blog.

The Neverland story by Emma Re

Once upon a time there lived a fairy named Pirella. She lived in Neverland. One day she went to Puppy Princess. Puppy Princess lived in a castle. It was as big as the world. Pirella was delivering an old sink, but the princess didn't want it. The guards took the sink back to a wizard named Soup. He was a fixer upper. The wizard was happy to fix something, as he hadn’t been able to fix anything for a hundred years! It was fixed on Monday. Puppy was happy to get her sink fixed so she gave it to Pirella for her eighth birthday. Pirella loved the sink and she remembered that it was the sink she delivered. She said thank you to everybody. And THAT MADE THEIR DAY!!!

The End

WALHT self assess our work against a writing blog rubric.

WALHT self assess our work against a writing blog rubric.


Ms Brand's authors have been fortunate to receive a copy of Whaea Petra's (Tamaki Primary) blog rubric. Thank you for sharing, Whaea Petra.  This rubric has been adapted by many teachers within the Manaiakalani Cluster schools, but I believe the origin was started at a Point England school.

This rubric really made us think about our work before we just published it to our blog.

Using this in class today we have marked Emma Re's writing.  Special shout out to Emma for being so brave and sharing her work with the class as we built our knowledge in marking rubrics. We were also able to compare and contrast our results and justify our thinking.  We were also able to practice our concept of kindness and empathy as we were able to make connections that Emma is one of our peers and we were critiquing her work, so how could we do that in a positive way?

Now we are all assessing our own work against the blogging rubric criteria. Look out for our new and improved blog posts today.

This is a great tool that will definitely help us in all our future learning.

From Ms Brand's authors.