Thursday, 13 August 2015

Persuasive Writing- Pet Shop

We have been looking at persuasive writing. Here are some of our arguments. 
Do you agree or disagree?


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  1. Deb Adie13 August 2015 at 17:57

    Lucy,I definitely agree with you.Maybe you might want to use more describing words.from Brooke

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  2. Angela9 November 2015 at 12:09

    Kia ora, Mia M and Jacqueline, You have included some awesome tips to help us make smart decisions. The comment that Jacqueline included on her slide demonstrated to us all how to write a quality comment. She has included lots of positive ideas to help us.

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  3. Danielle9 November 2015 at 12:37

    Kia ora Lucy, I like the way you have persuaded us to think about having a pet shop at school.

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  4. kate23 November 2015 at 12:21

    Kia Ora Lucy I definitely like the idea of having a pet shop at school.I could bring my cat for a groom,will it have food for the pets?

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