tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8420184365958459401.post7838721347984170176..comments2023-08-02T19:46:58.046+12:00Comments on In Cloud 9 2015 @ Stonefields School: Sack Race by MargotSchool Apps Ownerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08629777795087603003noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8420184365958459401.post-75654390271482785212015-11-23T12:39:06.606+13:002015-11-23T12:39:06.606+13:00Hi Margot I liked the middle of your story Because...Hi Margot I liked the middle of your story Because it was showing what the other hubs look like too .Keirahttp://stonefieldstrivers.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8420184365958459401.post-47229984990503777472015-11-23T12:13:43.250+13:002015-11-23T12:13:43.250+13:00Hi Margot I liked your post and I'm sure some ...Hi Margot I liked your post and I'm sure some other people will too. My favourite bit was when you told us your report for the sack race. I thought that was good about your writing. My feedback would be to tell us what was going on. I hope you had a great athletics day. Bye Margot.Maddiehttp://stonefieldstrivers.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8420184365958459401.post-42715105018819066692015-11-23T12:01:02.782+13:002015-11-23T12:01:02.782+13:00Kia Ora Margot
I really liked how you where talki...Kia Ora Margot <br />I really liked how you where talking about your reporting. I think you asked really good questions. Did you like reporting?Brittahttp://stonefieldstrivers.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8420184365958459401.post-55442108698343625522015-11-23T12:00:38.778+13:002015-11-23T12:00:38.778+13:00To Margot.
I liked how you said which hub the peop...To Margot.<br />I liked how you said which hub the people in your story about the sack race were in. I liked how you put your writing in green because it is my favourite colour. What was your favourite part of Athletics day?Georgiahttp://stonefieldstrivers.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8420184365958459401.post-47197669570119573422015-11-16T12:40:43.203+13:002015-11-16T12:40:43.203+13:00This comment has been removed by the author.Georgiahttp://stonefieldstrivers.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8420184365958459401.post-4305580442989702462015-11-16T10:39:02.304+13:002015-11-16T10:39:02.304+13:00Hello Margot, I really like your story the only th...Hello Margot, I really like your story the only thing I would add is more words like what, where, when, how. I especially like all the quotes that you included. It sounds like Harrison and Ella were very determined in athletics. My favorite part of your story is that you included your name in the beginning as it made you sound like a news presenter.Miahttp://stonefieldstrivers.blogspot.co.nz/search/label/Mia%20Mnoreply@blogger.com